Who: The dog barked.
What: The dog barked in fear.
When: As Night fell, the dog barked in fear.
Where: As night fell, the dog barked in fear trying to escape from the cage.
Why: As night passed, the dog barked in fear trying to escape from the cage and trying to find his owner.
As night passed, the dog barked in fear trying to escape from the cage, and trying to find his owner
This is our collaborative work that John and I did. We started with a small sentence and then added on it so it can be more interesting.
Great work Haliano and John. You have transformed your sentences into powerful sentences! Using the 5Ws helps to make your writing much more interesting. Your sentences paint a clear picture in my mind.
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