My blog comment to room 6 by haliano

This is my blog comment to Patrick.

The Red poppy Drama: by Haliano

On Thursday Mrs Eeles read a story called Red poppy it was about when the World War One battle started Mrs Eeles read half of the page then we played a drama game. I am learning to make a freeze frame.

Reviewing Somebody Else’s Artwork By Halaiano

Reviewing Somebody Else’s Artwork

Have a look at the artwork’s in classroom.

Choose one which is your favourite to critique.

Please be honest, don’t just choose your best friend’s for friendship sake, choose someone’s artwork that shows quality, contrast, boldness and originality

Whose artwork do you like the most?

My favourite is patrick because my favourite colour is yellow and blue and I like it because he traced his head perfect and it looks like him.

Why did you choose this person’s artwork?

Because it’s perfectly done and he took his time and made no smudges.

What would you do next time to ensure your artwork is just as good?

I will use different colours like Patrick and use less blue and use some different colourful colours next time.

If you were going to give this person a rating out of ten what would you give it and why?

I will give 10|10 to Patrick because his art great and lovely and neat and I like how he traced his head perfectly around.

My reflecting on my Andy Warhol themed portrait by Halaiano.

Reflecting on my Andy Warhol themed portrait

1. Are you pleased with your Andy Warhol themed portrait? why / why not?

Yes because it’s is colourful.

2. What did you find easy when you created your portrait?

I found it easy dying my background and my hair.

3. What part did you find tricky when you were creating your portrait? -think about tracing round your face, outlining your face using a black marker pen, dabbing areas using the dye, dying the background.

I find it tricky dying my face because I always tried not to make any smudges

on my eyes, lips and eyebrows.       

4. Who / What helped you when you were creating your portrait?

Miss Paton helped me to choose my colour for my eyebrows.

5. What would you do differently next time? Think about: tracing around your face, features on your face, dabbing the dye colours, colour choice, photograph, time management skills.

I would try next time to colour my face different and to take my time. I will use less blue next time and use some orenge

6. What frustrated you when you created your Andy Warhol themed artwork?

I felt frustrated when I was tracing my face.

My results on addition on XtraMaths

This is my results on XtraMaths I think I'm getting better at XtraMaths but it aright if I get some wrong.